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Dimanche 8 octobre 2006


Pauline and Maxime!

Don't worry! More to come!
d'autres travaux suivent...
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Dimanche 15 octobre 2006
Congratulations to William, Doriane and Emma as well ! ... Oops, sorry William and Doriane!

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Mercredi 10 janvier 2007
Benoît s'est lancé!  ... et  sur un 2ème article!  Voici un beau début d'année!

(Pour t'aider à règler quelques problèmes d'expressiont: retourne vers tes commentaires :-) )
WELL DONE, Benoît! Keep at it!

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Vendredi 12 janvier 2007
Vos récits de vacances s'enrichissent.
Pour vous aider à continuer à améliorer, un peu d'aide:

Benoît: For chistmas holiday, I went to the Alps to ski but there was no snow.

Pauline:  It was "good" ... Essaie d'enrichir:... interesting? nice? great?    I had a good time?    It was good fun?

Pauline and Elodie : During my holidays, I played on my computer.

Anaïs: During my holiday I saw some friends and my familly. For christmas nigth I gave and I  got lot of presents. I got / had lot of games, money, T-shirt, ...I played with my presents. I went to the ice-rink  with my friend and  we ate at a  Quick restaurant. I watched T.V and I played with my computer  and I called  my grand-mother. What about you ?

Adeline Co-: During the Christmas holidays I went to the ice rink and to the cinema. Next, I went to my grand parents' house to see my aunt and I went to visit my grand mother and my cousin with his daughter.
During the second week of holidays I went to "espace jeunes" to see  my friends.

Justine: During my holidays I went to Moulin to celebrate Christmas. After that I went to the Alps but I didn't ski  because there was no snow.   
Toujours quelques  soucis pour exprimer le but ... Un peu d'aide pour s'entraîner
 ou bien ....  Why did you go there ? (ou mieux: What did you go there for?)  ... to eat spaghetti! 

 



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Lundi 15 janvier 2007

 WILLIAM! An excellent beginning!

Some suggestions before the test:

"During the winter holidays on 2006, I went to the mountains. I left (my house) home on february 22nd. I was with my parents and my brother. I travelled by car. I stayed in a hotel. I had dinner in a restaurant. I came back home ... (preposition... before a date) march 1st. My holiday's were great!"
... and: were you alone in the car, and in the restaurant?
Keep at it, William! And bring some  friends to the blog ;-)!
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Samedi 20 janvier 2007
Maryne!



"during my holidays, I left to my grand mother en st doulchard for celebrated chrismas day I had any presents of my family them I came back at bourges for celebrated a new year with my friends .Myholidays were GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!! and you benoit who did you go with????"

 a little help for you there ... and maybe you will get help from friends (peut- être que des camarades vont t'aider à te corriger)...


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Dimanche 21 janvier 2007
Super Nanou is a new
  on the Blog!
...For my winter holiday I left on December 27th and I was with my familly.
I travelled by car.
I went to the mountains in france.
The trip waq very long (for me): it lasted 5 hours.
I stayed in a guest house and I had a dinner at home because the restaurant was close.
I came back home on the 4th.
My holiday was great !!!!

when did you leave ?
who did you go with ?
how did you travel ?
where did you go ?
how long did it last ?
where did you stay ?
what did you do ?
when did you come back ?
what was your holiday like ?

A surveiller: la PRESENTATION d'un script de dialogue... pour qu'on s'y retrouve: Question /réponse   , etc ... (que vous allez bientôt enrichir d'ailleurs).

Pouvez- vous aider Nanou à réorganiser son texte, pour qu'il ressemble à un script de DIALOGUE?
... Attention à trouver un départ "logique" !

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